Aw, I love it. So so good. Lovely Jayne-dialogue, perfectly in character-- and sometimes he's so hard to write. But you did it very very well.
I loved the whole premise of this fic, that she had seen it, and it had already happened and he just needed to accept it. XD
Yeah, loved it. And for a first FF-fic, was pretty close to perfect. ^_^
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