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and your very flesh shall be a great poem (

clockwork_jo) wrote on August 24th, 2009 at 03:54 pm

Aw, I love it. So so good. Lovely Jayne-dialogue, perfectly in character-- and sometimes he's so hard to write. But you did it very very well.

I loved the whole premise of this fic, that she had seen it, and it had already happened and he just needed to accept it. XD

Yeah, loved it. And for a first FF-fic, was pretty close to perfect. ^_^

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